Everyone seemed to agree that I was on the right path with my illustration...once they had stopped laughing :) Everything was very positive, everyone thought that the blobby hand done type would be best for the place names and they liked the way I had cozen to fold my leaflet. Simon pointed me in the direction of the illustrator Ralph Steadman, saying that perhaps I needed to 'go a little crazier' with the illustration style. They did however, bring up the question of what I was going to call it, which had not crossed my mind before. There were some jokey suggestion such as Bethlehem but I do need to consider this more before I continue.
When I explained quite a minimal exterior design and that perhaps a bodoni esque font would adorn the belly band, questions were raised as to whether this would disrupt the visual continuity of the piece, so perhaps I should re think this.